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Getting Comfortable with “Jane”

For many Austen fans, reading one of her novels is taking an armchair vacation back to England in the early 1800s, known as the Regency. They see this period as a time of tea and etiquette. The Austen who conjures up such ideas may even inspire people to take up Regency dancing and Regency fashion. This is when Austen, the novelist, becomes to her readers “Jane,” their friend. (For details on the Regency, go to Chapter 2.)

Hearing the friendly, welcoming narrator

Readers may love Dickens, but I never hear Dickens's fans calling him “Charles.” Yet Austen fans easily call Austen “Jane.” Jane is that wonderfully witty, wise, and well-spoken narrator who's a friendly and welcome companion as you read the novel.

For example, in Austen's early, frustrated attempt at getting published, the narrator in
Northanger Abbey
tells you of the marriage of the lovely and charming Eleanor Tilney to a presumably equally lovely and charming young Viscount, who never appears in the novel, but whose laundry lists do appear from Catherine Morland's snooping. Listen to the narrator:

My own joy on the occasion is very sincere. . . . [Eleanor's] husband was really very deserving of her; independent of his peerage, his wealth, and his attachment, being to a precision the most charming young man in the world.
Any
further definition of his merits must be unnecessary; the most charming young man in the world is instantly before the imagination of us all. (NA 2:16)

The narrative voice you've just heard is attractive; it invited you into the book by saying “us all.” Keep in mind the obvious — that it's only in a novel that you encounter a narrator in whose company you read for hundreds of pages. Can you point to a narrator who's more lovely and charming than Austen?

Hearing “Jane, the friend” become the witty, terse narrator

Sometimes, however, “Jane, the friend” gets a little terse, but never with the reader. Instead, Austen uses her characters as the butts of her jokes. For example, in
Persuasion,
she sets up a conversation between Mrs. Musgrove and Mrs. Croft. Mrs. Musgrove exclaims to her new friend, “‘What a great traveler you must have been!'” and Mrs. Croft replies:

Pretty well, ma'am, in the fifteen years of my marriage. I have crossed the Atlantic four times, and have been more than once to the East Indies and back again . . . But I never went beyond the Streights — and never was in the West Indies. We do not call Bermuda or Bahama, you know, the West Indies. (P 1:8)

Now “Jane,” the narrative voice, enters: “Mrs. Musgrove had not a word to say in dissent;
she
could not accuse herself of having ever called them anything in the whole course of her life.” So much for Mrs. Musgrove's knowledge of geography! Although this narrative voice sounds like it has quite a little bite to it, remember that in
Pride and Prejudice,
Mr. Bennet's delightful sarcasm has to come from someone. And that someone, of course, is Austen.

The sarcasm that appears in the narrator's quip about Mrs. Musgrove's ignorance of geography and throughout Mr. Bennet's speech first appeared coming from Austen, herself, in the first full publication of her remaining letters in 1932 under the editorship of R. W. Chapman. These letters reveal an Austen who could be cynical, nasty, cruel, and sarcastic. Here are some examples:

Mrs. Hall, of Sherborne, was brought to bed yesterday of a dead child, some weeks before she expected, owing to a fright. I suppose she happened unawares to look at her husband. (October 27, 1798)

Poor Mr. Hall: He's now down in history as having such a frightening face that his wife's glancing at him caused her to immediately bear a premature dead baby.

She was only 22 when she wrote that. But she didn't soften with age. Here she is at 32:

Only think of Mrs. Holder's being dead! — Poor woman, she has done the only thing in the world she could possibly do to make one cease to abuse her! (October 14, 1813)

Not only does Austen make jokes about dead babies, but about dead ladies, too! And even in speaking of Mrs. Holder's death, Austen shows neither kindness nor sympathy for the recently deceased.

Delivering the Hollywood goods

The same “Jane, the friend” who attracts armchair travelers to read and imaginatively travel back to “Jolly Olde England,” also attracts filmgoers and television viewers and thus film and TV producers.

Austen's novels offer characters and events in lovely English settings with the people dressed in attractive costumes of a previous era. How comforting to get away from life's daily hassles with such well-dressed characters and charming settings! But her novels provide comfort in another way: by presenting logical stories, where all the loose ends are tied up at the end. Logic is very comforting in an increasingly complex and often irrational world. Logic of this type — where everything is explained — is what makes television criminal investigation shows popular. Think about it: Character relationships on these shows are made secondary to solving the crime through the use of sophisticated scientific apparatus and forensic medical tests that uncover the guilty party. The solution of the crime returns temporary order to a disordered world. This is satisfying to the TV viewer.

What does a logically-presented story, with a beginning, a middle, and an end, do? It appeals to the natural human desire for answers, for security, for assuredness. And what does an Austen novel do?
Emma,
for example, provides a thought-provoking plot with a surprise at the end, rendered through interesting and articulate (except for poor Harriet!) characters, dressed in lovely Regency attire. A second reading reveals that all the clues to the surprise were there in the book all along. But in following Emma's thinking, which was wrong, you were led down the wrong path. And there's no need for even a finger-print test, though Frank Churchill's distracting Emma from her Weymouth questions by calling her attention to Ford's Store and going inside to buy new gloves certainly covers his romantic handiwork. The surprise is explained at the end of the novel. Emma was “duped.” But she's wiser (or at least you hope so) and better for it.

Austen tells such a good story in
Pride and Prejudice,
where Elizabeth and Darcy begin as verbal sparring partners, that this novel, along with Shakespeare's Beatrice and Benedick of
Much Ado About Nothing
, provides the DNA for all those movies about antagonistic lovers who finally realize they belong together. Whether it's Tracy versus Hepburn or Jean Arthur versus Cary Grant, Austen's presence (and okay, Shakespeare's, too!) is hovering over the scene. And of course, Helen Fielding's
Bridget Jones
books and films are directly indebted to Austen's
Pride and Prejudice
— though Fielding's Bridget lacks all the self-possession, wit, and smarts of Elizabeth Bennet. Indeed, poor Bridget makes
Emma
's Harriet Smith look like she's ready for rocket science!

Going back to Hollywood

Austen's attention to details makes her novels great sources for scripts. With her ear for conversational voice and the words she gives to a voice, the script writer can borrow pages of dialogue from the novel. Granted, the adapter must frequently add extra little scenes here and there to explain the story line. But the original dialogue is so right for the characters that it is not unusual to hear from the screen the exact, or almost the exact, words written in the novel.

Observing with Austen

Flip ahead to Chapter 3, and study Cassandra Austen's sketch of Jane Austen. Notice how sharp her eyes look and see her look of determination. But wait! There's something else. Her eyes aren't looking at the artist (her sister) but over her right shoulder. What could she be looking at or listening for? Whatever “it” is, “it” has her attention, and this portrait captures the astute observer that Jane Ascent was. No matter what she was doing, she was taking in all the little details of the world around her. Austen then used those details to masterfully write her novels, and those details make reading about her characters fun and insightful.

Writing dialogue and conversation

The observant Austen is a writer of witty dialogues that are the specialty of her novels. Each character's speech seems to match him or her perfectly. Austen puts those characters in conversations that you overhear in the reading. By doing this, she enables her readers to come to know the characters of her novels in the same way you know people in real life: by listening to what they say and picking up on how they say it. Sections of her novels read like little plays; for example, when Darcy, Bingley, Miss Bingley, and Elizabeth converse in
Pride and Prejudice
(PP 1:10), the pages of their conversation look almost like a script for a play. Even the first page of the same novel, with Mr. and Mrs. Bennet in dialogue, is filled with conversation, allowing the readers to make first impressions of the couple.

Putting Mark Twain and Jane Austen in the same paragraph

When Mark Twain was traveling on his lecture circuit, he was asked by a budding writer how to make characters seem real. Twain answered, “Don't say, ‘The old lady screamed.' Just bring her on and let her scream.” In other words, Twain was advocating writing dramatically, showing the story as much as possible through dialogue, instead of just telling the events. Austen does the same thing. So why should I warn you that I'm putting Twain and Austen in the same paragraph? Twain was notorious for making disparaging remarks about Jane Austen. For example, he said, “Every time I read
Pride and Prejudice,
I want to dig her up and hit her over the head with her own shin bone.”
Every time
he reads
Pride and Prejudice
? What's wrong with this picture? How many times has he read the book, and if he hates it so much, why does he keep reading it? I would guess that, actually, Twain liked Austen. He made those nasty Austen jokes to annoy his great friend, the novelist William Dean Howells, who praised Austen's writing skills frequently and enthusiastically.

Having an ear for a character's voice

Showing the character in action, instead of telling the reader about the character, makes that character vivid. Austen lets her characters speak for themselves. For example, look at
Pride and Prejudice.
In the drawing room at Rosings, Elizabeth Bennet and Colonel Fitzwilliam are talking as they're seated at the pianoforte across the room from Lady Catherine. Lady Catherine abruptly interrupts them and calls out:

What is it you are saying, Fitzwilliam? What is it you are talking of? What are you telling Miss Bennet? Let me hear what it is. [Fitzwilliam replies] We are talking of music, Madam. [Lady Catherine exclaims] Of music! Then pray, speak aloud. It is of all subjects my delight. I must have my share in the conversation, if you are speaking of music. There are few people in England, I suppose, who have a more true enjoyment of music than myself, or a better natural taste. If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient. (PP 2:8)

Even if you've never opened
Pride and Prejudice,
you know what Lady Catherine is like from this brief excerpt of her speech: rude, arrogant, selfish, controlling, egocentric. You know all that without Austen saying “Lady Catherine is rude, arrogant, selfish, controlling, and egocentric.” Austen shows Lady Catherine's personality through the action of the character.

Having an eye for details

Austen's observational skills and her eye for details give the readers characters who are as multifaceted as any of you are today. Here are a few examples:

Within a page or two of
Emma,
the heroine can be helpful, conniving, and snide.

In writing the jealous and ignorant Lucy Steele in
Sense and Sensibility,
Austen slips grammatical errors into her speech — not a lot, just enough to remind the reader that Lucy is no lady.

Austen mentions Lucy's eyes several times, in order to suggest to the reader how closely and uncomfortably Lucy is scrutinizing Elinor.

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