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) Replaced ‘carriage, then’ with ‘carriage, and then’.

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) Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.

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) Replaced ‘attack, then’ with ‘attack, and then’.

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) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘
Invisible Fist
’. Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’.

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) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘add 3’ with ‘remember to add 3’.

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) Replaced ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘time, by’ with ‘time by’.

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) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’.

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) Replaced ‘stone, then’ with ‘stone, and then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow of Atonement’.

(
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) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘
Mind Charm
’. Replaced ‘effect, then’ with ‘effect, and then’.

(
81
) Replaced ‘the four of you’ with ‘the five of you’. Replaced ‘bodyguards and’ with ‘bodyguards, and’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’.

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) Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’. Replaced ‘asault’ with ‘assault’ in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

(
85
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘the die’ with ‘the dice’.

(
86
) Replaced ‘imperial family have taken refuge’ with ‘Imperial Family has taken refuge’. Replaced ‘icy cold’ with ‘ice cold’.

(
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) Replaced ‘A healing fungi’ with ‘A healing fungus’.

(
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) Replaced ‘mid-summer’ with ‘midsummer’.

(
90
) Replaced ‘Shavane, ‘he'll’ with ‘Shavane. ‘He'll’.

(
92
) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and have attained the Kai rank of Sun Knight,’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and wish to use it’ (cf.
erratum for Section 22
). Deleted ‘or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery,’ in view of the previous change, as an Improved Discipline is no longer required here. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.

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94
) Replaced ‘gases and’ with ‘gases, and’.

(
95
) Replaced ‘
Crack
!; the’ with ‘
Crack
! The’. Replaced ‘ribcage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘Knight, or’ with ‘Knight or’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.

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) Replaced ‘throght’ with ‘throughout’. Replaced ‘distant corridor’ with ‘distant corridors’.

(
97
) Replaced ‘him, then’ with ‘him, and then’. Replaced ‘burrows and’ with ‘burrows, and’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘agarashi’ with ‘Agarashi’. Replaced ‘fresh water spring’ with ‘freshwater spring’. Replaced ‘Hyunsei Foothills’ with ‘Hyunsei foothills’.

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) Replaced ‘icy-fiends’ with ‘ice-fiends’.

(
100
) Replaced ‘imperial family’ with ‘Imperial Family’.

(
101
) Replaced ‘interpretation of the signs indicate’ with ‘interpretation of the signs indicates’. Replaced ‘advise that’ with ‘advise her that’. Replaced ‘imperial family’ with ‘Imperial Family’.

(
102
) Added ‘(Remember to erase the Sabito Root from your
Action Chart
.)’ to the end of the section.

(
103
) Replaced ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’. Replaced ‘skills, or’ with ‘skills, if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, or’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘If you possess Magi-magic, have reached the rank of Kai Grand Guardian, and wish to use this Discipline’ with ‘If you possess Magi-magic, a Bow and at least one Arrow, have reached the rank of Kai Grand Guardian, and wish to use this Discipline’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘inside the tent’ with ‘outside the tent’ since all of the tactics employed are designed to make the enemy flee the tent.

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) Replaced each occurrence of ‘the die’ with ‘the dice’.

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) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

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) Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

(
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) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Replaced ‘Kai pathsmanship’ with ‘Magnakai Pathsmanship’.

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109
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.

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110
) Replaced ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’. Replaced ‘A large force of Bhanarian cavalry have’ with ‘A large force of Bhanarian cavalry has’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

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) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.

(
112
) Replaced ‘position, then’ with ‘position, and then’.

(
115
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘
Net
’. Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’. Replaced ‘A gout of sticky fibres gush from your hand and engulf’ with ‘A gout of sticky fibres gushes from your hand and engulfs’.

(
116
) Replaced ‘says: ‘please’ with ‘says: ‘Please’. Added a period after ‘turn to 108’.

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) Replaced ‘tiger's head emblem’ with ‘tiger's-head emblem’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

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118
) Replaced ‘Some descend’ with ‘Some of the fissures descend’. Replaced ‘western rim’ with ‘eastern rim’ as
Sections 2
and
130
indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning.

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) Replaced ‘distant corridor’ with ‘distant corridors’.

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120
) Replaced ‘Shavane, ‘he'll’ with ‘Shavane. ‘He'll’. Replaced ‘Klorva’ with ‘Potion of Klorva’. Replaced ‘your backpack’ with ‘your Backpack’.

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121
) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

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122
) Replaced ‘sable stallion’ with ‘stable stallion’. Replaced ‘horse, then’ with ‘horse, and then’. Replaced ‘20 Imperial Cavalry’ with ‘twenty Imperial Cavalry’. Replaced ‘Kirusami’ with ‘
kirusami
’.

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) Replaced ‘imperial family’ with ‘Imperial Family’.

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) Replaced ‘(= 20 Ren)’ with ‘(= 5 Ren each)’.

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) Replaced ‘the die’ with ‘the dice’. Replaced ‘pass then’ with ‘pass them’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
127
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.

(
128
) Replaced ‘Special Items list’ with ‘
list of Special Items
’.

(
129
) Replaced ‘signal, then’ with ‘signal, and then’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.

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132
) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
133
) Replaced ‘Go Captain’ with ‘Go, Captain’.

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135
) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Replaced ‘gutteral’ with ‘guttural’.

(
137
) Replaced ‘Mitzu, ‘please’ with ‘Mitzu. ‘Please’. Replaced ‘with your Bow’ with ‘with a Bow’ since you may not necessarily be carrying a Bow.

(
139
) Replaced ‘Special Items list’ with ‘
list of Special Items
’.

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140
) Replaced ‘steam cannon’ with ‘steam-cannon’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘the imperial family of Chai are hiding here’ with ‘the Imperial Family of Chai is hiding here’.

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141
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

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142
) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.

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143
) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’.

(
144
) Replaced ‘improved weapon skill’ with ‘Weaponmastery’ to avoid confusion with the Kai Weaponskill Discipline.

(
145
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘15 minutes’ with ‘fifteen minutes’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant’ with ‘the sergeant’.

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146
) Replaced ‘agarashi’ with ‘Agarashi’.

(
147
) Replaced ‘Superior’ with ‘Superior or higher’. Replaced ‘skills, or’ with ‘skills, if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, or’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.

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) Replaced ‘its cawing and the flapping of its wings startles’ with ‘its cawing and the flapping of its wings startle’. Replaced ‘Javain Bandit’ with ‘Javaian Bandit’. Replaced ‘Javain bandit’ with ‘Javaian bandit’ in the illustration's caption.

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) Replaced ‘hard pressed’ with ‘hard-pressed’. Replaced ‘manouvering’ with ‘manoeuvring’.

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150
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’.

(
151
) Replaced ‘western rim’ with ‘eastern rim’ as
Sections 2
and
130
indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning.

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152
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
155
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘High above you’ with ‘High above, you’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.

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) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

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) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.

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) Replaced ‘advanced Mastery’ with ‘advanced mastery’. Replaced ‘an hypnoptic’ with ‘a hypnotic’.

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) Replaced each occurrence of ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.

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) Replaced ‘sunbreak’ with ‘daybreak’.

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) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow of Atonement’.

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) Replaced ‘duststorm’ with ‘dust storm’. Replaced ‘out of Rakholi’ with ‘out from Rakholi’.

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164
) Replaced ‘the chest’ with ‘their chests’. Replaced ‘icy-fiend’ with ‘ice-fiend’.

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165
) Replaced ‘spell words’ with ‘spell-words’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

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166
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’. Replaced ‘dice, and have’ with ‘dice and have’.

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167
) Replaced ‘steam cannon’ with ‘steam-cannon’. Replaced ‘turn to 263’ with ‘turn to 116’ to bring
Section 116
back into the adventure. Replaced ‘imperial family’ with ‘Imperial Family’.

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168
) Replaced ‘none of these skills or rank, or the Backpack Item’ with ‘neither of these skills, nor the Backpack Item, or have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.

(
170
) Swapped the destination of the links, so that now a score of 6 or lower now leads to
Section 55
which has the larger
ENDURANCE
penalty, whereas a score of 7 or more now leads to
Section 285
.

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171
) Replaced ‘imperial family’ with ‘Imperial Family’.

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172
) Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Added ‘You must fight this combat without your Kai Weapon.’ (cf.
Section 139
).

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173
) Replaced ‘Mitzu, ‘please’ with ‘Mitzu. ‘Please’. Replaced ‘with your Bow’ with ‘with a Bow’ since you may not necessarily be carrying a Bow.

(
174
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’. Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘combat skill’ with ‘
COMBAT SKILL
’.

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) Replaced ‘power word’ with ‘power-word’.

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) Replaced ‘Deliverance, and’ with ‘Deliverance and’.

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179
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’.

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) Replaced ‘icy-fiends’ with ‘ice-fiends’.

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182
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.

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183
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

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184
) Replaced ‘steam cannon’ with ‘steam-cannon’.

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185
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘half ie,’ with ‘half, i.e.’.

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186
) Replaced ‘pain, then’ with ‘pain; then’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.

(
187
) Replaced ‘horse, then’ with ‘horse, and then’. Replaced ‘Ang'sei’ with ‘
ang'sei
’. Replaced ‘20 Imperial Cavalry’ with ‘twenty Imperial Cavalry’. Replaced ‘Kirusami’ with ‘
kirusami
’. Replaced ‘Papers of State’ with ‘papers of state’.

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189
) Replaced ‘therain-bow’ with ‘the rainbow’. Replaced ‘milleniums’ with ‘millennia’. Replaced ‘vampire Lord Sejanoz’ with ‘vampire, Lord Sejanoz’.

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190
) Replaced ‘special item’ with ‘Special Item’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘the die’ with ‘the dice’.

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192
) Replaced ‘apporpriate’ with ‘appropriate’. Replaced ‘Gold crowns’ with ‘Gold Crowns’.

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193
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

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