Read The Prisoners of Time Online
Authors: Joe Dever
Tags: #Fiction, #Fantasy, #Lone Wolf, #Magnamund
We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please
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the Project Aon Staff.
(
Title Page
) Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘world of Daziarn’ with ‘world of the Daziarn’. Replaced ‘them or’ with ‘them, or’. Replaced ‘await you’ with ‘awaits you’.
(
The Story So Far …
) Removed the quotation marks from ‘
koura-tas-kai
’. Replaced ‘Kai monastery’ with ‘Kai Monastery’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘purpose and’ with ‘purpose, and’. Replaced ‘Adamas's’ with ‘Adamas' ’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Darklord armies’ with ‘Darkland armies’.
(
The Game Rules
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘fall to zero’ with ‘fall to zero or below’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘Chart (you’ with ‘Chart. (You’. Replaced ‘Items).’ with ‘Items.)’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘
Action Chart
. (ie’ with ‘
Action Chart
(i.e.’. Replaced ‘14.)’ with ‘14).’. Replaced ‘points.)’ with ‘points).’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf Magnakai’ with ‘
Lone Wolf Magnakai
’.
(
Magnakai Disciplines
) Added ‘The fact that you are skilled with three Weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire Weapons during your adventure. For every
Lone Wolf
book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional Weapon to your list.’ to the description of Weaponmastery. This text is taken directly from the Weaponmastery section found in
The Kingdoms of Terror
. Added ‘(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)’ to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced ‘knowledge mastery’ with ‘knowledge that mastery’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘weapons list’ with ‘
Weapons List
’. Replaced ‘two weapons’ with ‘two Weapons’. Replaced ‘blindness and’ with ‘blindness, and’. Replaced ‘roots and’ with ‘roots, and’. Replaced ‘will be of use’ with ‘may be of use’. Added ‘If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the
Random Number Table
, when using the Bow.’ from the
Equipment
section. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf Magnakai’ with ‘
Lone Wolf Magnakai
’.
(
Equipment
) Removed both occurrences of ‘Surplus Special Items may be left in safe-keeping at your Kai monastery.’ since safekeeping is not available at the beginning of this adventure. Replaced all occurrences of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘Weaponmastery with a bow’ with ‘Weaponmastery with Bow’. Replaced ‘combat, therefore’ with ‘combat; therefore’. Replaced ‘two weapons’ with ‘two Weapons’. Replaced ‘your list’ with ‘your
Weaponmastery Checklist
’. Deleted ‘If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the
Random Number Table
, when using the Bow.’. Added ‘You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
Rules for Combat
) Replaced ‘on the page after the Random Number Table.’ with ‘in the back of this book’. Replaced ‘reduced to zero’ with ‘reduced to zero or below’. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.’ with ‘at which point that combatant is declared dead.’.
(
Levels of Magnakai Training
) Replaced ‘rank and titles’ with ‘ranks and titles’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf Magnakai’ with ‘
Lone Wolf Magnakai
’.
(
Lore-circles of the Magnakai
) Capitalized the title ‘Lore-circle Bonuses’.
(
Improved Disciplines
) Removed the quotation marks from ‘Improved Disciplines’ in the last paragraph. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘ritual sacrifice or’ with ‘ritual sacrifice, or’. Replaced ‘ritual sacrifice or’ with ‘ritual sacrifice, or’.
(
Magnakai Wisdom
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series.
(
2
) Replaced ‘chaos-creatures’ with ‘Chaos-creatures’.
(
3
) Replaced ‘Kai Skill’ with ‘Kai skill’.
(
4
) Replaced ‘handrail’ with ‘hand-rail’.
(
5
) Replaced ‘chaos horde’ with ‘chaos-horde’. Replaced ‘share a Meal’ with ‘share a meal’. Added ‘(you do not need to erase a Meal from your
Action Chart
)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
7
) Replaced ‘weight is’ with ‘weight are’.
(
8
) Replaced ‘Lorestone of the Kai’ with ‘Lorestone of Nyxator’.
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10
) Replaced ‘chaos-creatures’ with ‘Chaos-creatures’.
(
12
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(
14
) Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’. Replaced ‘Mentora or more’ with ‘Mentora or higher’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(
17
) Replaced ‘handweapon’ with ‘hand weapon’. Replaced ‘swordbelt’ with ‘sword belt’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
19
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
20
) Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’. Replaced ‘Tutelary or more’ with ‘Tutelary or higher’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
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21
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
23
) Replaced ‘honour and’ with ‘honour, and’.
(
25
) Changed the presentation of the candidate sequence completions to fit our technologies. This includes changing the label of each sequence completion from the corresponding section to a letter and adding choices below the illustration which read, for example, ‘If you believe A completes the sequence,
turn to 216
.’
(
26
) Replaced ‘Discipline, or’ with ‘Discipline or’.
(
27
) Replaced ‘army are’ with ‘army is’. Replaced ‘jubliant’ with ‘jubilant’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(
32
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
33
) Replaced ‘handrail’ with ‘hand-rail’.
(
34
) Added ‘Unless you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Curing and have reached the Kai rank of Mentora or higher, add 2 to any
ENDURANCE
point losses you sustain during this combat, owing to the poisonous lash of their tentacles.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition (cf.
Section 298
).
(
38
) Replaced ‘his comrade and’ with ‘his comrade, and’.
(
40
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘hand, then’ with ‘hand, and then’.
(
41
) Replaced ‘lances, then’ with ‘lances; then’.
(
42
) Replaced ‘air-tight’ with ‘airtight’. Replaced ‘lock, then’ with ‘lock, and then’.
(
43
) Replaced ‘Discipline of’ with ‘Disciplines of’.
(
45
) Replaced ‘swordbelt’ with ‘sword belt’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
48
) Replaced ‘Kai’ with ‘Magnakai’. Replaced ‘Tutelary or more’ with ‘Tutelary or higher’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill, or’.
(
50
) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘glass and’ with ‘glass, and’. Replaced ‘windows and’ with ‘windows, and’.
(
56
) Replaced ‘dragon-mount’ with ‘dragonmount’. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced ‘warrior, I’ with ‘warrior; I’.
(
58
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘pauses, then’ with ‘pauses, and then’.
(
59
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(
62
) Added ‘(If you have both Disciplines, add only 4 to the number you have picked.)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
63
) Italicised ‘
en route
’.
(
65
) Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’. Replaced ‘Mentora or more’ with ‘Mentora or higher’. Replaced ‘Curing, and’ with ‘Curing and’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(
69
) Replaced ‘lurking ready’ with ‘lurking, ready’.
(
70
) Replaced ‘those who you do pass’ with ‘those whom you do pass’.
(
72
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
73
) Replaced ‘prevent’ with ‘prevents’.
(
74
) Replaced ‘battle wounds’ with ‘battle-wounds’.
(
76
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
77
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
78
) Replaced ‘vegetables or’ with ‘vegetables, or’.
(
81
) Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(
82
) Replaced ‘chaos-creature's’ with ‘Chaos-creature's’. Replaced ‘bow skill’ with ‘bow-skill’.
(
83
) Replaced ‘re-united’ with ‘reunited’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘stairs and’ with ‘stairs, and’.
(
84
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘echoes, ‘And’ with ‘echoes, ‘and’.
(
86
) Replaced ‘Tutelary or more’ with ‘Tutelary or higher’. Replaced ‘prodding and’ with ‘prodding, and’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’.
(
88
) Replaced ‘Kai’ with ‘Magnakai’. Replaced ‘Mentora or more’ with ‘Mentora or higher’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(
91
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
92
) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(
93
) Replaced ‘the skill’ with ‘this skill’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(
95
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Added ‘(If you have both Disciplines, add only 4 to the number you have picked.)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
98
) Replaced ‘Zhamin plateau’ with ‘Zhamin Plateau’.
(
101
) Replaced ‘well being’ with ‘well-being’.
(
105
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
107
) Replaced ‘steps confident’ with ‘steps, confident’.
(
108
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(
109
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(
113
) Replaced ‘swordbelt’ with ‘sword belt’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
114
) Replaced ‘stars or’ with ‘stars, or’.
(
117
) Replaced ‘village the’ with ‘village, the’. Replaced ‘Kai’ with ‘Magnakai’. Replaced ‘Principalin or more’ with ‘Principalin or higher’.
(
118
) Replaced ‘Mentora or more’ with ‘Mentora or higher’. Replaced ‘Primate or more’ with ‘Primate or higher’.
(
120
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(
122
) Replaced ‘co-ordinates’ with ‘coordinates’.
(
123
) Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’.
(
125
) Replaced ‘Kai’ with ‘Magnakai’. Replaced ‘Mentora or more’ with ‘Mentora or higher’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(
126
) Added ‘, or do not wish to use them,’ to the choice to go deeper into the fissure without the aid of the items mentioned.
(
127
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
132
) Replaced ‘your chest and’ with ‘your chest, and’.
(
134
) Replaced ‘beam it’ with ‘beam, it’. Replaced ‘Rope, or’ with ‘Rope or’.
(
135
) Made the choice that leads to
Section 256
the first in the list. Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(
136
) Replaced ‘swordbelt’ with ‘sword belt’.
(
137
) Since
Section 332
was originally unreachable, we changed the choice involving leaping from the chariot to point there instead of
Section 299
. Since
Section 299
involves a greater loss of
ENDURANCE
, we reasoned that it should only be accessible after the chariot is out of control.
(
138
) Replaced ‘much-needed’ with ‘much needed’.
(
141
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘clearing, then’ with ‘clearing, and then’.
(
147
) Replaced ‘swordbelt’ with ‘sword belt’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(
150
) Italicised ‘
en route
’.
(
151
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
153
) Replaced ‘monolith so’ with ‘monolith, so’.
(
154
) Replaced ‘chaos-creatures’ with ‘Chaos-creatures’.
(
155
) Replaced ‘paws, then’ with ‘paws. Then’.
(
158
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(
161
) Replaced ‘Kai’ with ‘Magnakai’. Replaced ‘Primate or more’ with ‘Primate or higher’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(
165
) Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Pathsmanship, and’ with ‘Pathsmanship and’.