the religious dimension of the death, but this is diverted into something like an aside. It is Ethel who is given this conventional reflection:
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The lively Ethel is probably the nearest thing to the heroine of the novel and perhaps the least appropriate character to be given this conventional reflectionnot only conventional but also wrong, since, as we have seen, Flora is not ennobled. Nothing is made of this reflection on the infant's own spiritual welfare: though she was "kept from the evil of this world," and therefore has a good chance of heaven, her presence there is no more certain than that of the enskied Mrs. May, a constantly beneficent presencethough she, after bearing eleven children, can hardly be said to have escaped the world and its evils.
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Diagnosisand Nondiagnosis
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And what did these fictional children die of? The answer may be even more elusive than in the case of the real children, because in addition to the embarrassment, reticence, and fear that are present in the accounts of real disease, we need to add the effect of vagueness in assisting plot development or character portrayal.
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The death of Muriel Halifax is perhaps the clearest case of sacrificing medical plausibility to literary effect. That she dies not of disease but from the kick of a horse is, I suggested, for reasons of plot, but for reasons of pathos she does not die immediately, lingering on for several weeks in order to expire gradually and beautifully. "When we asked her if she felt ill, she always answered 'Oh, no! only so very tired.' Nothing more" (chapter 28). When she tries to get out of bed she finds she cannot walk and has to hold onto furniture and says, "I can't walk, I am so tired." We are not told where the horse's kick lands, but it was presumably on the abdomen, and the most likely cause of death would have been injury to the spleen or kidneys; in both cases, the pain would have been severe. "Only tired, Nothing more" is fine for the atmosphere of resignation but highly implausible medically.
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