Authors: Laura Lee Fall
Staring endlessly into each other’s eyes, as he bent his head down closer to her, slants forward
kissing her with a very wet open mouth kiss, sliding his tongue between her moist parted lips, as
tongues join circling slowly.
Saul was a very good kisser, as she thought she would choke on his tongue so deeply.
With his heart pounding fast stopped looking at her and breathlessly said, “No don’t stop Saul”.
That smiled kissing her heavier, leading all down her neck, sighed, “Oh my god!”
Passionately licking her neck, all up and down, as Ella wrapped her arms around his neck tightly
with him swirling his tongue all over her neck.
Kissing her neck very wet, sloppy actually that is how heavily he sucked on Ella’s neck with her
fingers running wildly all through his long wavy blonde hair.
In a passionate hurry, Saul lifted her up onto the sink counter and her legs grew apart letting
him in between, as they embraced tightly.
He looked right into her big brown eyes, as she did back, slowly his hand slid inside her shorts
gently pushing her panties aside.
Staring at each other, until she sucked her breath completely back and watching her expression
Saul increased the pace of his working finger deeply inside her, as she separated her quivering
thighs allowing him more access.
Become carried away in growing arousal kissing Ella very passionately all over her neck, as her
head dropped back, “Oh my god Saul”.
Sliding his tongue all up her neck, as one hand slid onto her breast, Ella moans out louder.
Feeling the deepest wiggling of his finger inside her, and squeezing her breast, she become
breathless, and sliding another finger into her, as she gasped erratically, out of breath, “Oh my
god your good!” That really grew his interest.
Swung her head back further and he was biting her neck very hard sliding his wet tongue down
from her neck swirling his tongue all over her breast.
Took her delectable hard nipples between his teeth, as she was gasping.
Rocking against his working hand, pressing his thumb against her clitoris massaging slowly and
trembling gasping out, “Oh, something strange is happening to me Saul?”
Moving his thumb faster against her clitoris, slightly jerking, side-to-side, as his finger deeply
inside felt her melt.
Ella gasped, as her body stiffened in climax crying out, “Oh-oh-oh”,
“Oh my god Saul!”
“It happened!” With him watching her closely.
In addition, Ella’s shirt half up and nervously said, “Aw shoot sorry y’all, just needed to do a
count on the glasses”.
Stuttering anxiously he added, “Real sorry”, with his hand over his eyes.
Promptly, Ella had pulled her shirt down and Shane broke out in a jumpy sweat
actually.
Turned around quickly going back to the swinging doors and Shane really swung those doors
going out fast to the front of the bar and said, “I knew it after the ring he bought her”.
“Aw heck, I didn’t want to see it though”, and sneer.
Saul with Ella went right back to kissing, as his tongue circled with hers fast both becoming lost
into the heat of passion, breathlessly she said, “Take me home Saul”.
“Now?” Hands against her face.
“Yes, I am finished here and you got three hours until opening”, softly brushing her cheek Saul
asked, “Sure you want this?”
“I really do like you a lot, probably more than that Saul”.
“Okay, but it may not be what you think this time around”.
With her eyes large taking a deep gulp she said, “Yes, I know what you mean Saul”.
Saul told Shane, “I will be back before the bar opens”, Shane just gave a nervous grin, as he kept
doing the bookkeeping.
At the Wiley house, Brenda had saw Saul rushing into the kitchen getting his keys fast.
She was by the sink washing off some dishes and as he; left she hurried over to the window
looking out.
Noticed him and Ella leaving together in his truck she mumbled, “Oh lord, please love her right
boy, knew this day was coming and dreaded it”.
In the truck driving, Saul asked, “What about your parents?”
“If you’re lucky they will be home about 9:00 pm”.
He just looked at her, as she stared out the window silently and Saul thought her parents must
not be cool at all or parents.
Ten minutes later made it to her house Saul got out of the truck and opened the passenger door
for her then few seconds later walked into the house with him just looking around.
The home was much different from his parent’s home what he was familiar with.
Pure old fashion country, it looked all flashy and very bright colors of everything and the
curtains were actually orange.
Ella was a bit nervous, as she just recently turned eighteen and was scared, but knew she cared a
great deal for him.
Giving a little smile, taking her trembling hand, Saul asked, “Where do we go?”
Pointing she replied, “The last door on the left is my room”.
Holding her hand Saul led her to the room, and asked, “Hey is your room blinding?”
“Not at all, I am far from my parents or want to be anything like them”.
Walking into her bedroom Saul shut the door and it was dim a bit dark, Ella had a big canopy
top bed with a deep purple comforter.
Immediately Saul went to kiss her and putting her hand against his chest asked, “What if you
don’t like it with me, because I don’t know anything”.
“I will like it, you don’t have to do or worry about nothing”, Ella smiled, and Saul added, “Just
let me do my job”, and winked.
“Make me feel good”.
Looking at him staring back and said, “Yes I know you can do the job just don’t be disappointed
Saul”.
“I won't be Ella, but if the hurts bad, just tell me and I’ll stop”.
She was scared now with a worried look upon her face, swiftly Saul swept Ella off her feet carried
her over to the bed, gently lay her down, as he cupped the back of her neck for support.
Heart pounding, Saul looked right into her big brown eyes and said, “Your trembling girl”.
Looking right at him, she said, “I’m scared”.
“Nah, don’t be”, as he understood kissing Ella’s face softly, as she giggles he asked, “Aw this
helping those nerves?”
“Yes”, as he slid his tongue across Ella’s lips asking, “How’s this?”
“Oh very nice”.
“I want you to feel good”, she smiled, as Saul slid his tongue across her lips sliding deeply into
her mouth.
Pinning her underneath holding her arms above her head, pressing his body firmly onto her,
Saul swirls his tongue all over her neck breathing hard, as her head pushed completely back into
the pillows gasping, “Oh my God!”
“Oh yes Saul!”
Restlessly she was gasping, as he rubs his fingers on her breast feeling firmly then rubbing softly
all down her quivering legs.
Removing her shorts quickly, pulls her pink panties off fast, as she was breathing heavy along
with him separating her legs, as he leans down onto her slightly, smothering her with kisses all
over.
Easily his finger slid deep inside of her melting womanhood wiggling fast, as she was crying
out, “Oh my God!”
Her head buried back into the pillows now from the much faster and very hard wiggling of his
two fingers working deep inside. He leans forward lowing his head, thrusts his tongue against
her clitoris.
Saul’s manhood was throbbing feeling her completely melting around his working fingers and
circling his tongue slowly now, she sucked her breath back, as ripples of ecstasy flooded through
her.
Saul rose up, leans forward and said, “I love you Ella girl”.
Softly touched his face and said, “I am so in love with you Saul”, that placed his hand against her
face saying, “Aw baby, I am gonna show you how much”.
Rising up on the bed, knelt before her, drew his zipper down grinning and said, “My turn!”
Smirking Saul replied, “Oh yeah baby very much!”
Covering her face, she said, “I do not know how”.
Stroking his hardness, “Oh I will guide you, don’t worry”.
“Saul have you been with many girls?”
“Enough that I learned how to please the one I’m with”.
Took a deep gulp and said, “Guess many huh”.
“Do not go there Ella”, and comes down onto her firmly in the bare flesh, as she said, “I am so
nervous”, and he replied, “Don’t be Ella girl”.
Back at the Wiley home, standing looking through the cupboard, Brenda asked, “Hey Shane can
you do me a big favor?”
Rolling his dark eyes, “What maw store”, sitting by the table sorting cards on the table playing
solitaire.
“Yes boy will you run me up to the market?”
Stood up, puts the playing cards away and said, “Sure maw, come on”, grabbing his keys off the
hook on the wall.
At the grocery store.
Shane stood by the checkout lane looking through magazines and was really rolling his eyes
mumbling, “Heck, hurry up maw, shoot I got a date”.
Brenda was down a lane of items, being fussy.
“Shoot these beans or those”, as she pointed and kept grabbing each can.
Standing there with each can in her hand and then said, “Aw heck”, putting both cans in the
cart.
A man approached her and said, “Wiley’s”.
Turning around, Brenda replied, “Excuse me sir what was that?” He smelled of booze strong and
staggered.
“Yeah you run that bar”, as he even slurred.
Puzzled look, Brenda said, “I beg your pardon”.
Staggering more he remarked, “Definitely saw you many times”.
Standing there holding another can of beans for her chili and he asked, “You see much of the
baby?”
Dumfounded, “Who?” Eyes ready to pop out from shock.
Angrily, he knocked a few cans off the shelf and added, “Guess leave it to people that run a bar to
knock up my girl”.
Becoming nervous, Brenda gasped out, “Oh good lord, what did you say sir?”
“Your boy and my daughter have a kid”.
The person become irate pushing the whole shelf of cans down onto the floor.
At that shocking moment, Brenda was scared and he comes closer to her and now yelled,
“LADY YOUR GRANDKID!” Close in her face.
Dropping the can of beans from her trembling hands Brenda had tears.
Looked furious at her, as tears roll she said, “I am sorry sir, I never knew of a child”.
Upon Brenda and very mad, looking right at her.
Mumbling, “Gee what is it a girl or boy and from which boy?”
The person starts yelling, “HEY LADY”
“YOU HEAR ME!” Shaking the shopping cart.
Nervously Brenda bent down picking up the can and held it tightly, as he said, “You low down
people running a sleazy bar”, and Brenda had tears saying, “We are not awful people”.
The angry person was shouting in Brenda’s face, “BUY IT SOME DIAPERS!”
“WILEY!” Right upon Brenda that stepped back scared.
Standing up front by the magazine rack, Shane really rolled his eyes, as he heard their name
shouted out.
Therefore, put the magazine down fast and hurried away then rushing down the lane where he
saw his maw with some man close to her and rushing up to them.
Very wrong move for the person, Brenda watched her son crack his neck, quickly pulling at him
saying, “No Shane, please don’t!”
“Yeah boy listen to your mommy”, chuckles swaying.
Grinning Shane said, “Aw, getting smart with me are you”, shoot that’s it”, curled his fist.
Trembling Brenda said, “Come on Shane, please don’t, just let it go, there’s been some
misunderstanding here”. Shane saw the many cans on the floor and hesitated.
Shane grinned close in the man’s face and said, “Woe dude lucky, because my maw saved you
one heck of a beating”.
The person stood silently now with his head hung and Shane in his face added, “No one raises
their voice at our maw”.
“NOW SHANE BOY!”
“See dude she can only do it to us”, said Shane chuckling and walking away.
The man looked upset and walked away.
The whole ride back home, Brenda was upset and silent, driving Shane noticed and said, “Aw
maw, he was some drunken fool”.
Brenda sighed, “Oh my.”
Shane drove angrily and said, “Shoot makes people disrespect someone’s maw.”
Suddenly, punched the steering wheel hard and instantly split his knuckles open.
Brenda saw his bleeding hand and shook her head saying, “Boy please not today, because too
much is already going on”.
The remainder of the ride home both of them were silent, as the radio was on country music
plays.
Back home now.
Reaching into the van for a grocery bag, “Shane hurry and clean your hand up, I’ll get these two
bags”, said Brenda.
“You sure?” Waving her hand she said, “Just go on boy”.
Therefore, he did and she grabbed the bags in tears walking into the back door.
She literally felt sick and thought again, “A kid, but which boy?”
“Saul, maybe Sebastian, oh lord not Shane”, and she had tears roll.
Brenda thought, he is too silly yet for a child and tried putting the cans away in the cupboard,
but shaken up just dropped them all.