Someone's Watching

Someone’s Watching

Also by Sharon Potts
In Their Blood

A Novel

Sharon Potts

Copyright © 2011 by Sharon Potts

FIRST EDITION

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This book is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, organizations, places, and incidents either are the products of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events, businesses, locales, or persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.

ISBN: 978-1-60809-013-6

Published in the United States of America by Oceanview Publishing,
Longboat Key, Florida
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This is dedicated to my mom, Anna Hecht,
for whom life is all about joy, laughter, and learning.

Wow. My second published novel! It seems I was only just writing my acknowledgments for
In Their Blood
, trying to remember the dozens of people who had been involved during the five or so years leading to its publication. And now, a year later, I’m doing it again. Of course, I never would have gotten to “Book Two” without the support of everyone who helped make
In Their Blood
a reality—so my deepest gratitude continues to all of you who gave me flight. Special mention to:

Delia Foley, sister-in-law, critiquer, and friend extraordinaire.

Patricia Gussin, editor-in-chief and flight commander at Oceanview Publishing.

Elizabeth Trupin-Pulli, literary agent and cheering squad.

Maryglenn McCombs, Garcia’s mom, and perhaps the greatest publicist in the universe.

There’s tremendous pressure to create a second novel that’s at least as good as the first in a fraction of the time. Luckily, I had a secret weapon, an amazing critique group, who redirected me when I was going off track and saved me from rewriting hundreds of pages. Thank you Christine Kling, Neil Plakcy, Mike Jastrzebski, Miriam Auerbach, and Victoria Landis.

Then there are the folks who helped me get the details right.

Nathaniel Sandler, Miami Beach enthusiast and lover of the written word, Lieutenant Felix Ortega of the Miami Beach Police
Criminal Investigations/Homicide Unit, and Jack Turken, M.D., friend and medical consultant. Please excuse any liberties I’ve taken with your favorite city, Nate, and in my fictional investigation, Lieutenant. And Jack—if I didn’t get the dosages right, that’s entirely my fault, not yours.

Someone’s Watching
never would have been written if I hadn’t had the opportunity to peer into the world of twenty-somethings through the eyes of my amazing kids—Ben and Sarah. I’ll tell you again, kids, even if I’ve already said it a million times, I marvel at the adults you’ve become. You two, more than anything in my life, are my most satisfying reward, my greatest joy.

And finally, my gratitude to my best friend, personal support system, first and most important editor. I started writing ten years ago and probably would have given up in frustration many times if not for the faith and encouragement of my husband, Joe. Thank you, Darling.

Someone’s Watching

He was staring at her cleavage and she tried to be cool, like she did this kind of thing all the time. The spaghetti strap on her white sundress slipped off. Kate adjusted it back over her sunburned shoulder, then sipped the pink fruity drink he had bought her. The steel band in a tiki hut was playing reggae, and the night air smelled like fish and brine.

“So,” he said, “you girls down on spring break?” His tongue darted over the thin white line that split his upper lip into two uneven halves. His name was Carl and the other guy was Luis. They were med students—at least that’s what Carl said when they sat down at the outdoor bar next to Kate and Joanne.

“Yeah,” Kate said. “We’re staying in South Beach with some friends, but we decided to check out the Keys.”

Kate gave Joanne a warning look. Her best friend was clutching an oversized handbag against her chest, ignoring the drink in front of her. The last thing Kate wanted was for the two guys to know they were still in high school.

“That’s cool,” Carl said. He had dark hair and thick eyebrows and the scarred upper lip made him look a little like Elvis. But his friend Luis was the really sexy one with his shaved head and tattoos all over his muscled arms. Kate didn’t think they looked like med students, but hey, what would she know, having been holed up in Small-Town-Nowhere her whole life?

“The club scene can get old real quick,” Carl said. “It’s much more laid back here. We’re at a house on the bay. Pretty nice place. It even has an indoor pool.”

Luis seemed less than impressed with Kate and Joanne and was checking out the other girls as they came into the bar area from the parking lot or the beach. He wore a tank top, and every time he moved, his biceps rippled through his tattoos.

Kate sucked on the straw in her drink and caught Luis’s eye. She knew she was cute with her blue eyes, dimples, and long, black hair. And even though she had a few extra pounds on her, the boys back home in Deland didn’t seem to mind her in jeans.

Luis smiled at her with even white teeth against his tanned face. God, he was hot. If she was going to lose it, he was definitely the one. Maybe they’d invite the girls back to their house with its indoor pool.

She held her shoulders back and tossed her hair. She couldn’t believe she was doing this—her dad would kill her if he knew—but for the first time in her life she felt special. Let her dad find out. She really didn’t care. He might actually notice she existed.

The music was getting louder, the beat throbbing against the swish of metal. She crossed her legs, swinging her foot back and forth. She was wearing new white sandals with these cool clear plastic heels.

“Wanna dance?” Luis asked. His voice was low and rough, like sandpaper.

“Sure.” Kate slid off the bar stool. She was a little wobbly, not used to drinking. “Come dance with us,” she said to Joanne, feeling badly about leaving her friend alone with Carl.

Joanne shook her head. She was small and blonde and looked about twelve, even under all the makeup Kate had put on for her. Joanne hadn’t wanted to drive down to Key Largo, but Kate had begged her. Promised that the rest of the week they’d hang out by their hotel on South Beach if Kate could just have this one night.
One night out of her father’s radar, so she could lose her virginity and not have to show up for her freshman year in college like some overprotected weirdo.

Luis tugged on Kate’s hand and glanced back at Carl. “Why don’t you get the girls a couple of fresh drinks?”

The dance floor was wooden planks set in the sand. Kate rolled her head back as she got into the beat. Palm trees shifted in the warm breeze and stars glittered against the dark sky. Bodies spun around her. The light from hanging lanterns bounced off Luis’s bald, sweaty head. He slipped his tattooed arm around her waist and pulled her closer. Her sunburn made her hot all over. Luis brushed her lips with his. Her heart was beating like a maraca. What was she doing? Was she crazy?

“I, I have to sit down.” She was trembling. What she really needed was to get the hell out of here before she did something insane. What had she been thinking?

She returned to her stool at the bar. Two fresh pink drinks were in front of her and Joanne. “We need to be getting back to Miami,” Kate said.

“Right.” Carl said. “You high school kids probably have a curfew.”

Kate’s cheeks heated up.

“Hey man,” Luis said to Carl, “no reason to be a dick. If the girls gotta go, they gotta go.” He rested his hand on Kate’s shoulder. “No sweat, baby. But the least you can do is finish your drinks. My friend was nice enough to buy them for you.”

Joanne reached into her bag and pulled a twenty out of her wallet. “Here,” she said, waving the bill at Carl. “This is for our drinks. We’re leaving.”

“And now you insult me?” Carl said.

Luis’s breath was in Kate’s ear. It gave her goose bumps. “Please don’t go.”

“Let’s just stay a little longer, Joanne,” Kate said. “We don’t want to hurt anyone’s feelings. Okay?”

Mascara was smeared under Joanne’s eyes, and her nose, too big for her narrow face, was red-tipped like she was about to cry. “If that’s what you want.” Joanne gulped down the pink liquid.

Luis was so close, Kate could smell his sweat mingling with his cologne. The muscles beneath the tattoos were smooth as boulders. “Damn, you’re sexy,” he whispered.

Kate sipped her drink, afraid to leave, afraid to stay. The music got louder, softer. The breeze off the ocean warmed her, chilled her. The stars got larger, larger, like giant asteroids ready to explode.

Luis’s arm was around her. She could feel the heat off his body. They were walking, but she could hardly stand. He held her up. Her words came out like someone else’s voice. “Where are we going?”

“It’s okay, baby,” he said. “Everything’s all right.”

She was tired, so tired. Her eyes kept closing. Smell of leather, gasoline. Engine noise. Cool air. Warm breath against her cheek. The car stopped.

Kate opened her eyes. Trees all around. A jumping red dragon. Big white house, like a giant box on legs.

She was flying, or being carried. Her sandals scraped against something smooth and bumpy. Pebbles. Millions, billions, trillions of pebbles. A sandal fell off. She tried to say something, but it felt like there was glue in her mouth.

A baby was crying. “Let me go,” the baby sobbed. “Please let me go.”

Someone was holding Joanne. The one called Carl. He carried her like a baby. “Please let me go,” Joanne cried.

Kate got scared. “Joanne,” she tried to say, but nothing came out.

“Here you go,” someone said, and put something in Kate’s mouth.

Kate was dreaming. Such a lovely dream. Talcum powder and rainbows. Splashing water. Something silky beneath her. Silky, dark, blurry. A tongue in her mouth. Butterfly kisses up and down her skin. Everything nice. So nice.

A stab of pain.

Wet, falling. Help, I’m falling.

Help.

Squeezing, squeezing. Tighter, tighter. Stop.

Stop.

Breathe. Can’t breathe.

Drowning. I’m drowning.

Stop. Stop.

STOP.

Time went in and out. Black all around.

She got up and walked toward lightness. White walls covered with dragons. Red, blue, green. Rooms with no people. Windows like mirrors everywhere. She saw herself. Hair wild, long legs, full breasts. No clothes. Where were her clothes? Where was Joanne?

In front of her was a big, glowing blue square. A pool. A swimming pool. Lights from beneath. Someone floating. Long blonde hair spreading like a halo. Joanne swimming. Naked. Not swimming. Floating. Joanne naked? Not possible.

“Joanne,” Kate called. “Joanne, come out.”

Joanne floating. Face down. Face down in the water.

“Joanne?” she whispered.

Heat behind her, touching her shoulder. Sweat and cologne.

Joanne floating.

“Fuck,” a rough, sandpapery voice said. “Look what you’ve done.”

The plastic grocery bags swung from the handlebars as Robbie Ivy walked her bicycle onto the wrought iron stand in front of her apartment complex. The Sunday afternoon sun was strong, despite the shade of the palm trees, and she was perspiring in her T-shirt and worn jeans.

Robbie pushed a bar lock through her second-hand bicycle’s frame and front wheel and locked it in place on the rack. Then she wove the extra-thick metal chain around the wheels, frame, and rack, clicked the lock closed, and pocketed the keys. With all the hardware, she felt a bit like a warden in a penitentiary. But this was the third bicycle she’d bought in the three months since she’d moved here after she and Jeremy had decided to take a break from each other. She was determined not to lose this one, even as she noted the bare, bent frame of what was once a bicycle attached to the stand. The vultures had stripped down the bike taking both wheels, the seat, handlebars, and the wire basket.

Remind me again why I decided to live on South Beach?

Robbie ran her fingers through her sweaty chin-length black hair, then slipped her arms through her canvas satchel and grocery bags. Truth was, she liked it here. Liked the vividness of the colors, the crumbling old buildings, the salty smell of the ocean. But mostly she was here because of the warmth. After Boston, she’d decided she
had no use for cold or the changing seasons. Year-round summer worked just fine for her.